Top Direct Response copywriters can command up to $25,000 to
write a sales letter, plus a percentage of sales generated. (Our fees aren’t quite there yet!) Usually these fees are
paid by deep corporate pockets with millions to gain or lose, yet they still
give mere mortals sticker shock. I understand.
But wait…
Shocker of the Day:
The amazing lead generation results of solid Direct Response
ads have a dark side that no one in my field talks about much: if you only use Direct Response, your image will suffer.
In fact, all ad
types have an “inverse”. If you only use TOMA ads, don’t expect a big lead
count. If you have no Retention effort, don’t wonder why you lose customers.
Balance is critical to your success. So,
if you agree on that point, you’re ready to find how to boost leads “on demand”
by intelligent use of Direct Response lead generation.
Direct Response Ads
are hard-edged offers. They turn heads. They jolt the reader. If
they’re doing their job right, the prospect gets pulled in – sometimes by
asking, “How can they offer this?” Remember, the end of scanning is the
beginning of selling. That’s done using these ingredients.
You
aren’t the target audience. So stop
talking about yourself. Forget
bragging about your own self-serving
virtues or knowledge. Point your Direct
Response ads at your customers. Enter
their subconscious. Address them personally.
Use "you" and “your” instead of "us" or "we"
in every conceivable case.
Make
your headline powerful. It’s responsible for 80% of your readership,
so make it count or lose the prospect. Powerful headlines can be immediately
beneficial such as “How to Get a $157 ‘Super Tune Up’ Guaranteed to Save You At Least That Much in Utilities… For
Just $89”. They can be imperatives also,
like, "Get A New Water Heater that'll keep your showers steamy all year …
but please don't pay me a dime for 6 months!" Now, doesn’t that make you want to take a
second look?
Write
about benefits, not features. Tell prospects how they will benefit – and if
measurable – to what degree they'll benefit. Then tell them when
they'll benefit. You can even try a “damaging admission”, such as “We’re
offering this because we’re having a slow season and we want to keep all of our
techs on staff and busy.” Your reader must be able to see and feel the gain (or
loss) becoming emotionally involved
in the process.
Inform
your reader with meaningful specifics and reversal of risk. If you just use
the same dumb phrases as everyone else, you're wasting their time and your
money.
Tell them specifically what they’re going to get
and how you can guarantee it. Instead of “We’re fast, reliable, and have the
best quality in town!” (which is like, a major snoozer), try "Over 93% of
our calls are handled within 24 hours."
Instead of the worn-out "Satisfaction Guaranteed," try
"You’re guaranteed same day service and
satisfaction". Instead of “We can save you money on time”, try
"You'll reduce utility bills by 17% or get a check back for the
difference." Get creative and tell prospects how you'll be accountable for
their comfort, gain, and the competitive advantage only you offer.
Well worded specifics keep readers’ attention and
supercharge leads.
Tell
the prospect what to do. This is the "call to action," so give
clear directions. If there are any special conditions to your offer, tell
the prospect or you're asking for confusion. As an option to increase immediacy of leads, impart a sense of urgency
– such as a specified length of time or number of available units.
I’ll go so far as to say that a Direct Response offer without a
limitation is not an offer.
Many contractors are scared to make
offers that differentiate them from other contractors, which is great news for
those who will. So use intelligent Direct Response for your next lead
generating campaign. Direct Response can also be used in newspaper, as inserts,
for radio and even television. It works great for service and upgrades. Use it
wisely and profit accordingly.
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